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SSSSnake

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Sometimes I get confused,
do you love me or do you pitty me?
You say that you want nothing more than to be with me,
but turn away and run when i call you.
Why?
You act so scared of me, yet so bold.
Anger in your voice whenever I hear you.
You tell me that you love me with annoyance in your voice.
I dont need you to servive,
I've made it this long with out you,
So dont pitty me.
Dont houmor me?
I love you, that is the only truth and reality I still know
the only thing I still know
I dont wnat what we have to be fake, I dont want you to be fake
if you want to break, make it clean, make it fast.
dont be the trusted snake,
oh please, dont make me the fool.
((Ok, those few who read my work will know that most of the time my work dose not have so many flaws in it as this one dose....(mostly spelling) but I did not have spell check avalible to me at this time. Sorry! ))


I wrote this one because my boyfriend just really up set me...I tell him all the time that he needs to act more the way he feels and less closed off all the time. He was in the dark so long, so I understood it at first...but its been 5 months and nothing has changed, i'm starting to wonder if he's ever going to really let me in. He has the mind set of "I dont care" I just dont know if I can live with that forever.
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PriscillaMachado's avatar
Great work. Very touching.